It’s a gift . . . what can I say.
Funny, ain’t it though, how Silvano and I just completely disagreed on the berry photo?
Art is subjective, if anything.
It’s very subjective. Let’s see . . . my problem with the berry thing is that it’s too “in your face.” You have to study it to figure out what the orange balls are. And study it some more to figure out which of the gray sticks are the berry branches and which are the glom of trees in the background. This is all complicated by the fact that there aren’t any actual recognizable berry branches, but just a lot of mixed up twigs.
It’s very busy. Disjointed and hyperactive. Too much stuff in the shot. It’s not clear what the point is – is it the berries or is it the trees? Must be the berries, but those trees confuse things.
It’s also straight on. Wham. No lines to speak of. No up, no down. There actually isn’t even any depth, because nothing in the front ties into anything in the background.
On the other hand, the color of the berries against the snow is spectacular. There are different sizes and, just considering the berry bush, there IS depth. So, it’s a good subject.
If you could pick out a part of the bush that had line to it, like an arching branch, or a distinctively branching branch, and get it against only the snow or the sky – the contrast of the orange and the blue would be excellent – you’d have a good photograph.
If you could get a bush like that against a very interesting background, like a gray barn or building, or an old fence, then that would work in that you’d be looking through this mass of color to something interesting.
You’re right about this working in a metal-industrial frame. Depending on how you approach it, you could have this kind of industrial-color thing or you could have a botanical-symmetry thing.
Can you shoot it from underneath? So you get the sky as a background? Or from above at a slight angle, so you get the snow as a background?