Advice, tips, critisim let me have it

Playing with technology. Lets see if this works: http://www.box.net/shared/nphenggd5x

It’s ok for a tune I recorded about fifteen minutes after I learned it in two different keys. I kept cocking up the last phrase of the B part in the G version. Sorry. I’d redo it now, as it’s had a night to marinate in my head but my flatmate is asleep and might have a view on that.

Was playing it dead slow so hopefully you hear some of the things you can do to it.

sounded great to me…how long have you been playing the pipes…pretty amazing how quick you picked it up…cheers and thanks so much for sharing.