Help with an Air

Transcribing an air is a lot more difficult than a reel or jig isn’t it? I’ve been trying my first air, or rather the first run through of it, a lovely piece called Mi Le M’uilinn from Gavin Whelan’s new CD, Catch The Air. You can listen to it on Spotify at http://open.spotify.com/track/2xlxTzMfCYAWhHL78yTNYj Would anyone care to correct it for me or tell me where I’ve gone wrong. It’s not so much the notes - I can get those - but working out the timing/note values. MTGuru, you’re normally good at this. The piece is played on a Low F whistle, but I’ve transcribed it down three semitones for Low D whistle. Thanks guys.

X: 1
T: Mi Le M’uilinn
M: 6/8
L: 1/8
R: Air
K: D
|:+slide+B3 e/d/G2|d2{c/}B/A/!slide!B3-|B2 {a/}e/d/d/G3/2| {c/}A/G2 B/ d2e/g/|
+slide+e2d+slide+B3|{a/}ed2{c/}B/A/!slide!B2-|Bd2e/{a/}g!slide!g2|d{a/}ede!slide!B2|{a/}e{a/}edeG2 |G{c/}AG|