This microfiction thing got serialized this week at www.twitter.com/nanoism, and the whole piece is now featured at http://nanoism.net/serials/break-it-down/
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I like this.
Best wishes,
Jerry
I thought it was going to be our three-words-at-a-time story, so that was a little disappointing, but I liked it anyway. You did good there, Dale! 